Beginner drawing

I decided to start drawing, practiced for a month and developed further. I wanted knowledgeable artists to appreciate it and maybe give me some advice.
I was drawing my girlfriend and I don’t know if I should show her?

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If you just started drawing a month ago, then your prospects seem good (although to understand how good they are, it wouldn’t hurt to see at least a few more works). If you want to take it seriously, look for art books on anatomy (male, female), they simply depict poses wonderfully, demonstrate which muscles are activated in a particular case, and it’s good to learn a clear contour and how to feel the volume of the body.

As for this particular drawing (I’m not much of a critic – sometimes my criticism borders on nit-picking, I’ll warn you right away): the hips are a little tapered, they should be more, let’s say, elongated vertically. Hair, in general, nothing, but to say more, just a larger size would not hurt. There seems to be uncertainty with the hands – in principle, a standard bid for many artists (I myself sin, sometimes). Parting words: strive to make the outline as specific as possible. Touches are appropriate in a sketch, but the final picture should have straight, unambiguous lines.

Well, I repeat, these are still nitpicking, but the best is the enemy of the good. And the picture is really good.

For drawing, professional Painter https://mindepositcasino.co.uk/ from Corel is better – all the coolest game illustrations are drawn there.

And drawing in Photoshop is a perversion.

SAI is still better just because it is simpler. Professional tools are best left to the professionals who draw something like this

And SAI is more than enough.

The original was shown above.

I’ll tell you a terrible secret – the 2D graphics of your favorite computer games are also drawn on a computer. Amazing yes?

The comment with the original has been erased… I’ll tell you honestly, I didn’t understand anything..

It would be possible to only draw up to the waist, and direct all the scrupulousness to small details. It would look better.
How much work did it take?? (Just wondering.)

And I like that he drew it up to the knees. But I agree about the details, it wouldn’t hurt to add. The hair would be better, the finger would be more careful, otherwise it looks a bit dirty.